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DreadPirate
12-07-2004, 01:49 PM
You're picked up in a non-descript economy car, where you are promptly blind-folded. After what seems to be an hour, during which the car takes several turns and travels at varying rates of speed, highway, city and residential, the car enters a parking garage, judging from the sound.
You're let out of the car and led through a door. The blindfold is removed. A large man stands in front of you. He asks to see the invitation, which arrived, rather mysteriously, by appearing on the front seat of car while you were at work. The only identifying marks on it are a hologram of a blue rose hanging upside down and an anoynomous e-mail address in which to acknowledge and accept your invitation. Another email arrived to confirm when, and where you would be picked up. He glances at it, turns it in the light, then holds it under a black light. He pockets the invitation and nods at you. He looks somehow familar. A pro-footballer maybe?. He opens another door and bids you enter. As you enter he shuts the door behind you. Another man, he looks like an extra from MIB, directs you to a small panel on the wall. "Place your face against it, with your eyes open." A retinal scanner? What the hell? How the fuck did they get that?! From his demanor you decide not to ask.. A subtle audio cue acknowledges that your identity has been confirmed. Loseing his frosty bearing he beams a huge grin at you and says "Welcome to Humberts Hideaway".
A door? the wall? opens into short hallway before makling a turn to the left out of sight. Music softly drifts your way as walk down the hallway, and the air becomes lightly scented, you can barely detect the smell floral perfumes and the smoke of expensive cigars in the air. It is all at once heady. You're a bit apprehensive as the hallway comes to an end in a foyer, with a coatcheck to your right. A matronly woman takes your coat and gives you a smile as she also welcomes to the club. Still wondering what this "Club" is, your heart pounds as you reach for the bright brass door handle and open the door to the wonders beyond...

DreadPirate
12-08-2004, 01:49 PM
You step through the door and into a fairly large, dimly lit room, again the mixed odor of floral perfumes and cigar smoke hits your nose, but not overwhelming so. To your right in the distance you can make out a bar. Theres just enough light there to make it out, but you cant see who's behind the counter. In the middle of the room is a pole-dance stage. Several patrons sit around the edge watching the blonde on the stage go through her act. She's one of the most petite dancers you ever seen in a strip-club,. You admit to yourself, she is very cute with a body to match. In front of you, and arranged in a semi-circle around the stage are several tables and chairs. Most are occupied by individuals, or couples, some are completly filled with a group. None are empty. Surprisingly the number of women in attendance almost equals the number of men. A man and a woman at the table closest to you notice you and give you a silent nod. To the left, fully in shadow, you would guess there are chairs and couches available for "lap-dances". An older, very distinguished man, approaches you and you again are welcomed to "The Club". He gives you the practiced handshake and smile of a politician. No wonder he looked so damn familar. He used to represent your state in the US senate. While he had your attention, it seems that another table and chairs has been set up specifically for you, with a good view of the stage. He asks if you would care for a drink. You accept obligingly as he leads you to the table. He takes his leave as the next dancer takes the stage...

stokesay
12-09-2004, 04:39 AM
Ohmigod

Light me a Royale and pour that 15 year old Malt Scotch. I could be here some time...

nice one Dread...some more of that if you please....

backward
12-09-2004, 02:27 PM
Superb beginning!!! Please continue!

DreadPirate
12-13-2004, 07:01 AM
Seating yourself at the table provided your eyes return to the stage. As you watch the show, your head swims with questions. For the moment those questions are put aside as you sense movement coming toward you.
The waitress appears from the darkness with your drink, and, and....DAMN! She cant be more than..? Fuck it! Who cares!? You've seen, known, women for more mature than her that dont carry themselves with the grace, poise, and smoldering sexuality she posesses. She expertly and in a very provacative manner, takes the drink from the tray and places it on the table. Her eyes never leave your as she does. She turns,pirouettes?,and head backs toward the bar, wistfully you watch as she disappears into the shadows.
More questions surface, especially "Am I dreaming? ". Even though its cliched, you pinch yourself. Somehow someone nearby had noticed your actions and the reply. "No. Its a dream come true."
Your attention goes back to the stage as the fiery red-head continues to dance to Def Leppards' "Pour Some Sugar On Me".

stokesay
12-13-2004, 11:38 AM
oh yeah,

pour..... pour.....

rudy the cat
12-13-2004, 12:36 PM
HA! Let's all go, cant wait for more! Damn good stuff!

Daddy2u
12-13-2004, 01:07 PM
wait for me i wanna go too !!!! keep it cumming please!

1 Horny
12-13-2004, 04:47 PM
wait for me i wanna go too !!!! keep it cumming please!


I'd like to order a 15 year old scotch, and a 12 year old lap dance LOL

Keep it up!

Democable
12-13-2004, 07:16 PM
*just sits back, relaxes and enjoys the ride though paradise*

DreadPirate
02-04-2005, 02:24 PM
Barely after the red-head leaves the stages two girls take the stage, twins! OMG! It is a dream come true as the other patron commented. You sip on your drink, Your thoughts have slowed from the F1 speeds, to a more sedate Sunday drive speed, no doubt the drink has helped. The floor show helps also, you feel that stirring between your legs, you cant help it, you're becoming very aroused. Aroused in the way that you only allow yourself to become in your most private moments. With a famialirity that tonly twins can have, they caress, kiss and fondle each other. Things quickly heat up, and the action soon moves to the floor, one eagerly laps at the others pussy, while the recipient of the tongue lashing moans quite audibly, her hips thrusting ever so slightly as her sisters tongue teases her clit. Half embarressed you shift in your seat, but quickly relax as you sense from the darkness that you arent the only one that has sat forward to get a better view.

deeznutz
02-04-2005, 05:58 PM
lovely 3D, i liked the girl in the pink :D

loverotica100
02-05-2005, 06:17 AM
Thanks DreadPirate..great idea for a night out.

stokesay
02-05-2005, 08:00 AM
A Corona Corona..and some more of that Chivas if you please..

this floor show looks mighty interesting...

my compliments...thanks Dread.

DreadPirate
02-05-2005, 02:42 PM
Kick

A Corona Corona..and some more of that Chivas if you please..

this floor show looks mighty interesting...

my compliments...thanks Dread.

Libertyclub20
02-05-2005, 05:22 PM
Dread Pirate, absolutely brillant. Can't wait for more. Thank you for sharing your talent.
RedSkull

ColleenDutton (Deceased)
02-04-2007, 12:54 AM
Very erotic - well worth a bump

Prussian4
02-04-2007, 01:10 AM
excellent story

Ghost13s
02-05-2007, 12:50 PM
Wow those are some hot 3D toons!

KroShan
02-05-2007, 11:16 PM
love the artwork and the story. more please

jusayo
02-07-2007, 06:20 PM
Please... post more. As you can tell, I have a thing for daughters/cousins. I'm greatly interested in seeing what happens to our protagonist next!!!

DirtyJasper
02-16-2007, 10:44 AM
Me too

pss
02-19-2007, 06:13 AM
What a great start

Ghost13s
02-23-2007, 11:46 AM
Hot story! Hope to see more of it.